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Thursday, 27 August 2015
Writing a Simile
Once long ago a clown didn’t know how to juggle. He was practicing how to juggle. After that he got the hang of it.
And he went to the concert and said to the ring master man, “Can I do my juggling please?”
The big ringmaster man said, “Yes, you can”.
So the clown juggled in front of the people. He got a bit scared and he juggled in front of the people. He was happy that he had done that. Then he lived by the concert. He lived happily ever after.
Then when he was old he said to the ringmaster, “Can I go home now please?”
The ringmaster said, “Okay”.
“Thank you,” said the clown.
1 comment:
Anonymous
said...
You have some lovely ideas in your story. I like how you've written speaking parts in your story.
1 comment:
You have some lovely ideas in your story. I like how you've written speaking parts in your story.
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